1st Draft of Documentary

This is our first draft of our documentary-

WWW-

• The feedback we got from this is that the concept of our idea is good
• Interviews are good.

EBI-

• The sound needs fixing Voice overs
• The interviews need to be edited so that only the important points are shown
• Add more visuals
• The statistics part is way too long and it needs to be shorter
• More co-ordinating visuals
• Overall a lot of work is needed on this.