1st draft of ancillary

This is my 1st draft of my advert.

This is my attempted 1st draft of my double page spread.

Improvement: The feedback I got from this was that I have not considered any style or formation into this piece.

I was given advise to look at real examples that would give me an idea of what I could do for mine.

I was also told to look at the size contraints within each ancillary and look at how my target audience will view this.